I thought this was really good. The Alpha sounds like a jerk and thats so sad her dad killed himself in front of her. lol Mason just might be her mate.
this is very uniwue i like your writing style it is very original. few grammar mistakes no biggie
OOh i like this very unique names and everything personally can i just say i LOVE how you made them bold makes it so much easier to read!
AGGHH UPLOAD UPLOAD that is all i have to say and I LOVE IT definetly going to read more of it so please UPLOAD PLEASE
I'm not usualy into werewolf stories but this is pretty good. Your writing is strong. I wish I had more to say but I don't... Voted :)
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