Woah...I thought in the beginning that this is Edward's point of view...but what a twist!!! I love it!!! :D
Can you make a story out of this? I would love to see what happens. The End put me on edge and I was sad to find that there wasn't another chapter.
Great style of writing as always. Had me completely fooled thought it was Edward marrying Bella not Jacob. xxx
This was beautiful. I loved the style of writing, it matched the scene perfectly! I loved it!
I was extremely confused when it said 'I jolted awake' and then I realized it was jacobs POV not Edwards. Vey sneaky
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