lolololololololl this story is hilarious. I loved the fighting scene and the humor between jo and ryan is just hilarious. You're a really good writer :)
Funny stuff!!!!! Haha at first I was confused but now I understand I'm officially mindblown (:
I love the fight scene. You have a strength on describing things but no so much that it's awkward. After a while you kinda faded off, but It was still good.
I admit, I didn't really get it in the beginning but as the story went on I could understand :) I like it though :) It was a damn good story! *Voted*
Really enjoying the start of your story! Will definitely read more later when i have time :)
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