The Fallen and Forgotten

9 Part Story 1.1K Reads 59 Votes
finley777 By finley777 Updated 3 years ago
Aldines a small town no one thought any good would come from.  They were wrong though.  When their world is condemned to darkness and needs the help it most desires will the three fallen children rise to the calling or desert their ways and let greed over take them with the power it has to offer.
SpacerX SpacerX 3 years ago
Wow I love the plot and your writing is very interesting. I laughed at some parts and it just drew me in! Very nice!
Love_is_dangerous Love_is_dangerous 3 years ago
Its good! Maybe grammar here and there but no ones perfect! :D
CeciACelosia CeciACelosia 3 years ago
i like it, it's funny and wel written XD i will read more later on
qwerty20010 qwerty20010 3 years ago
im sorry but this dosnt captivate me, it might not be for all readers sorry!
it did to start with but i lost intersest...
BeAfraidOfDark BeAfraidOfDark 3 years ago
this a really well written chapter and i really liked it. it flows well and catches the reader straight away, nice!