That was beautiful. The rhyming and flow were perfect! It really helps ground you when you're having such thoughts. :) thank you.
This is magical. The way it flows the strong message it brings. \Wow. Utter amazement.
Nice. But there are many more ways to off yourself. Maybe you could consider writing a sequel? :)
wow. thats alot to consider when thinking about checking out. thanks for the insight.
great details and the flow of your words stick with you but pass to the next gracefully. great message
Wow, that was a powerful poem with a great message. Your ability to create images is awesome.
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