The Black Carnival

15 Part Story 98.2K Reads 1.3K Votes
GUMBiiE By GUMBiiE Updated a year ago
The Black Carnival is coming to town
Lock up your kids regardless the frown
The ringleader searches, looking for prey
Will you be next, to play his game?
Pjbunny Pjbunny 3 months ago
This was great! I'm thinking of making an evil carnival thing as well! I made one a year or two ago but my writing wasn't really good then, I'm hoping to do better.
        That was very good and creepy!
swagmasta83 swagmasta83 a year ago
have you watch the movie dark carnival its about these friends set there haunted carnival and it looks so real but its not but when they closed it down the carnival comes to life and starts killing the workers.
Embeexo Embeexo 2 years ago
Dammit I read it at night :| ... great start btw, it really drew me in :D
ali220198 ali220198 2 years ago
OMG!!!this is an amzing horror story!!! you're seriosly takented!! how the hell did you come up with this?!
blue_eyed_freak blue_eyed_freak 2 years ago
Really good. Creepy, scary, downright gruesome, but good :) I have a question, though - when did that dude sew that guy's eyes and mouth shut? Was it in the dark, when they were still coming out, or something?
Drusella77 Drusella77 2 years ago
Okay, note to self: NEVER GOING TO A CARNIVAL AGAIN! haha just kidding! But very well written and classically creepy!!! :)