OMG!!!this is an amzing horror story!!! you're seriosly takented!! how the hell did you come up with this?!
Okay, note to self: NEVER GOING TO A CARNIVAL AGAIN! haha just kidding! But very well written and classically creepy!!! :)
Really good horror story !!! But one the other hand im officially scared to set foot in a carnival now lol
I about crapped my pants when I just read the intro. Oh!!! So good. And- hey...wait....there is a trailor?!? How'd I miss it?!?!?
Wow!!! So far it's Soo good and really creppy and I love the little promo video that you made very nice :)
Finally, someone uses some 8th grade English tactis instead of just crappy writing. Very good carnival story, it's actually quite creepy.
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