the description is v. good, this is very sad and emotional. very innocent people and all.
this is really sweet yet so sad...u've definitly captured the childlike innocence...great job u should make more short stories they'e really good :)
Definitely intense and full of descriptions!! Very captivating and truly breathtaking :D VOTED!
beautiful such a breath taking story well written and captures the readers attention right away C:
I'm speechless. This is absolutely amazing. < Those words right there don't even begin to describe it! Voted.
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| Name | Nuh uh |
| Location | Where the wild things are... joke I'm in England |
| Member Since | Mar 15, 2010 |
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