I can see what you're getting at and it's certainly a good setup so far. Good prologue! :-)
Nicely done, it's a start but an interesting one, left me intrigued, hope you'll keep up the good work! :)
Aww man, seriously I can not wait that long, this sounds like it will be awsome story....... Can't wait
WOOOO REVENGE! i cant wait to read more of this. And im sorry it took so long to get to it!
your story is great but you really need to update faster because i need to know what happens :) good job
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