@aznsparkly The people that told youyour writing sucks will be killed by a ghost girl holding a chainsaw.
@Juiced We finally have the firsthand account of Moaning Myrtle's beginnings. Such a proud day for the HP fandom! Butterbeer's on me!
not bad, keep it going.. :) more you write the better you will get.. and don't listen to other people.. do what ur heart tells you. :)
Chainsaw's are cliche ;) S'okay, I like cliches. This was pretty good, gunna go read the rest naow.
tip: practise on your endings, because it is the last line in the story and it will give the reader an impression. your startings(topic sentences) are perfect
LOL, Good story! But, Now I'm scared to use the Bathroom. Thanks. :D X3 -Hailey :)
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