Inevitably Unfortunate

[Slowly Editing] Desdemona had a relatively normal life. She had her mum, her younger brother Drake and her best friend Rashel. She lived with her mother and her brother as they had believed that her father had left them. Other than this? Things were pretty decent, excluding the odd occasional dream. What Desdemona didn't expect was Darren. The moment that Darren Kelly and his family set foot in her town, everything begins to spiral out of control. Freaky dreams and odd coincidences soon become her norm. Desdemona had always been determined. So when a letter shows up at her doorstep with her name written in an intricate, cursive font with no return address, she tries to find the truth in the compicated web of lies that had slowly become her life. An unexpected person makes an apperance and life for Desdemona will never be the same again. All hell is about to break loose.... Literally. Sometimes you don't know what you have till it's gone. Copyright © 2012 | All Rights Reserved | Kelly Mcgrellis
Start Reading

Recent Comments

This is a powerful start, you described the scene so well. It was dramatic, eerie and spontaneous - a really promising start for me :)
Wow. I really like this.  Especially toward the end! The beginning was nice how u started it as well! Great job!
This is pretty good:)) I really liked the descriptions and dialogue. I wonder what will happen to Desdemona...? :0 _voted_


library_icon_grey.png Add

KellyLM

KellyLM

Name Kelly
Location England
Birthday Jan 29
Member Since Nov 17, 2011
Votes Received 7,396

Multimedia