The Nation Charmer-Book 1
Dahlia McLean finds herself thrust into a world of magic, monsters and immortals born at the beginning of time. She and her best friend, Troy Flarehill, and his sister, Helen are whisked away to a place where people of her 'type' are. And it is rumoured that at that place, all are descended from a magician who can control elemental magic...
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chershirecat
I love how you describe the character! great start. It really hooks us! so far , so good ! keep up the good work!
I love the story line. the introduction is really good and I hope to read more books by you
Hey, really like it so far, you write very well descriptive so it gives great imagery :D
Some words were redundant, other than that it has an interesting plot and without a doubt good introduction. Don't forget to check mine also. tnx. Voted. ;)
such an interesting read . Love your characters!! Especially Troy and Dahlia . I especially liked how you added in the descriptions! :)
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