It's very interesting and captivating! I love your story :D , at first I didn't understand the whole thing , but it's really great.
@bent97 Perhaps it's just me. Although I was much less confused after reading on, so no worries.
Very space-like and cool. Just a bit difficult to follow. Anyway, I still like the sci-fi aspect!
I dont normally read books like this one:/ But it was written well! I would rewrite your synopsis if i were you, i feel like it is WAY to confusing! *voted*
I like the plotline - it's very original. Your writing is very intriguing and makes sense too. It has just the right amount of desciption. Voted!
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