I really like the name you picked! Yay! I'm not the only person on Wattpad with an X-name in my story! I have a Xylia. :)
This is pretty inresting and unique, and at times a bit unrealistic. But overall good! Reading on! :)
i like how it was set up its very ...umm it leaves you trying to guess the next thing to happen but i really like it so far
Woah how'd he know he was going to die!?!! XD It's keeping me wanting more! Awesome writing. I loved the scene with the pendant.
fre grammar mistakes but besides that a wonderfull stroy. possibly the next best thing?
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