A Daughter's Grief: Foolish Acts, Remorseful Actions (Poem)

A poem, a story, a life. A young girl's life. An adolescence who struggles to keep up with her feelings. She struggles through her resentment and guilt of her mother's death. She blames herself and why shouldn't she? She caused her mom to worry. A mother who loved her only daughter- never once judging her actions... A foolish daughter she was. Both have been left, both have been caused pain and both loved each other- but she know how to show it?
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@Whispering some forms of poetry use repitition, just like onomatopoeia, and alliteration,also assonance, just different types of repitition
This was awsome! It was really sad, then... well, still kinda sad, but, I dunno, happier-ish? 
Haha, good job! :D
So emotional! You are a brilliant writer! I love this and will definitely read more of your works. Well done!


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