Religious Love

25 Part Story 37.4K Reads 617 Votes
breakhabibi By breakhabibi Updated 3 years ago
Layla Zenzoul finally has freedom. She just turned 18 and finished high school. Getting into the college of her dreams, being able to move into her own apartment, and getting a new job? Things just seem too good to be true. Until she meets Zane Farley, the blond headed Christian boy who captures her heart. Layla knows the consequences of fooling around with this boy, her parents disowning. Not only is she not allowed to date, but Layla is also Muslim. Her life is split in two, between love and religion.
FallenSnowflake FallenSnowflake 3 years ago
I love the way you introduced Zane. I like new characters met, especially around coffee shop areas. Great interactions between your protagonist and him. I was intrigued through the entire piece. However, you need to convert some of the periods into commas in the dialogue. :3 Voted.
Viixxx Viixxx 3 years ago
I can honestly say that I loved it! Perfect length for an opening, I think you completely deserve to win the wattys. Your writing has a good amount of deatils and descriptions, and I was intrigued by it the whole way through. Keep it up! I am definitely going to keep reading! ;)
Moresky Moresky 3 years ago
Wow, this is very 9ice, thumbs up, the mistakes doesn't really count, its the content-- voted!
ps:its the editors work to correct mistakes!!!!
_cryptic _cryptic 3 years ago
Ah a good refreshing rommance :)
well doonne :D
I enjoyed it was sweet
curby15 curby15 3 years ago
i hate saying mistakes its just that your aloud should be allowed awesome story though :)
wonderlandslost wonderlandslost 4 years ago
Super cute :) that intro was absolutely adorable :) definitely gonna keep reading!