Religious Love

25 Part Story 38.8K Reads 644 Votes
breakhabibi By breakhabibi Updated 3 years ago
Layla Zenzoul finally has freedom. She just turned 18 and finished high school. Getting into the college of her dreams, being able to move into her own apartment, and getting a new job? Things just seem too good to be true. Until she meets Zane Farley, the blond headed Christian boy who captures her heart. Layla knows the consequences of fooling around with this boy, her parents disowning. Not only is she not allowed to date, but Layla is also Muslim. Her life is split in two, between love and religion.
I love the way you introduced Zane. I like new characters met, especially around coffee shop areas. Great interactions between your protagonist and him. I was intrigued through the entire piece. However, you need to convert some of the periods into commas in the dialogue. :3 Voted.
I can honestly say that I loved it! Perfect length for an opening, I think you completely deserve to win the wattys. Your writing has a good amount of deatils and descriptions, and I was intrigued by it the whole way through. Keep it up! I am definitely going to keep reading! ;)
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Wow, this is very 9ice, thumbs up, the mistakes doesn't really count, its the content-- voted!
                                    ps:its the editors work to correct mistakes!!!!
Ah a good refreshing rommance :)
                                    well doonne :D
                                    I enjoyed it was sweet
i hate saying mistakes its just that your aloud should be allowed awesome story though :)
Super cute :) that intro was absolutely adorable :) definitely gonna keep reading!