So first you say mates and then you say reckon soooo....is she British or Texan?? IM TEXAN!!!!!
Instead of having 'and' replace it with a comma. Just a suggestion I think it sounds better!
I really don't wanna sound like a bitch but to help you add more detail and don't rush into it so fast
This is kinda confusing like it just skips around. Maybe more description and correct spelling(: But really good book! Good job!!
I like to read these stories! It makes my fell lucky that I didn't have to go through that! INLOVE with ur writting keep it up
i dont understand how the 14 year old are drinking and having sex? but i still like it its just that confuses me, but it is still really good
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