The Abused Girl

27 Part Story 394K Reads 5.4K Votes
dawn By dawn1989 Updated 10 months ago
Jessie was a normal 16 year old girl. She didnt know her real dad untill she met him when she was 13. She though he was the best and she was happy she found him...untill something more sinister started to happen.....
@Everyone_has_astory you keep 71. the last one is mine. her name is Audrey
I don't think it's that bad, not poorly written by any means
@Everyone_has_astory you were actually bothered to count that..........WOW!!
My 72 lines!!!! I think but I counted so who's stupid now??? Hehehe
I really don't wanna sound like a bitch but to help you add more detail and don't rush into it so fast
I like to read these stories! It makes my fell lucky that I didn't have to go through that! INLOVE with ur writting keep it up