@Everyone_has_astory you were actually bothered to count that..........WOW!!
So first you say mates and then you say reckon soooo....is she British or Texan?? IM TEXAN!!!!!
My 72 lines!!!! I think but I counted so who's stupid now??? Hehehe
Instead of having 'and' replace it with a comma. Just a suggestion I think it sounds better!
love it ignore the complaints dawn can't believe ppl don't seem to understand that we live in 2014 atm and it's what most teens do I certainly know I was and not ashamed to admit it carry on hunny I for one think it's fantastic welldone you xxx
I really don't wanna sound like a bitch but to help you add more detail and don't rush into it so fast
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