The Abused Girl

27 Part Story 354K Reads 4.4K Votes
dawn1989 By dawn1989 Updated 6 months ago
Jessie was a normal 16 year old girl. She didnt know her real dad untill she met him when she was 13. She though he was the best and she was happy she found him...untill something more sinister started to happen.....
antisocial_bandlover antisocial_bandlover 6 months ago
@Everyone_has_astory you were actually bothered to count that..........WOW!!
Everyone_has_astory Everyone_has_astory 6 months ago
So first you say mates and then you say reckon soooo....is she British or Texan?? IM TEXAN!!!!!
Everyone_has_astory Everyone_has_astory 6 months ago
My 72 lines!!!! I think but I counted so who's stupid now??? Hehehe
HaileyMobley HaileyMobley 9 months ago
Instead of having 'and' replace it with a comma. Just a suggestion I think it sounds better!
sophie0507 sophie0507 10 months ago
love it ignore the complaints dawn can't believe ppl don't seem to understand that we live in 2014 atm and it's what most teens do I certainly know I was and not ashamed to admit it carry on hunny I for one think it's fantastic welldone you xxx
bethferdinando bethferdinando 10 months ago
I really don't wanna sound like a bitch but to help you add more detail and don't rush into it so fast