I really don't wanna sound like a bitch but to help you add more detail and don't rush into it so fast
I like to read these stories! It makes my fell lucky that I didn't have to go through that! INLOVE with ur writting keep it up
Good story, I don't know where this is going though which is good, keeping the readers coming back for more :)
wow , this is really could keep writing im enjoying this , http://www.wattpad.com/1169076-fears-coming-true thanks xx
Awesome start!! I love the detail you've put into the characters so far. How new are you to Wattpad? I just started...
Off to a good start. You did a great job making her dad the kind of character your fans will love to hate.
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