Very amazing writing! I absolutley LOVED this!!!! Great job and keep up the good work!
Very well written. A lot of detail, nice. There are some grammar mistakes though.
Your a good writer I can tell but it would be best if you find ways to keep readers attention.
This is really good! You describe the characters personalities very well which makes them very believable! Awesome job :)
Enjoy the story. Really like how the setting feels realistic and the characters are believable
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