Iblis: A Superhero Story (Vol. 1-3)

32 Part Story 11.5K Reads 611 Votes
Myron Keith Gibert Jr By mkgibertjr Completed
Cideion Rodgers was an average teen, until a tragic event leaves him waking up in the hospital. Donning the alter-ego, Iblis, he sets out into the crime filled streets of Crystal Springs to discover the source of his newfound abilities. However, he must also adjust to balancing his new identity, school, and life with his mysterious guardian, "King".
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Is something different for what I usually read but I am glad I did cause it was an interesting read. The ending was marvelous and made me want to read more.
Actually, forget what I said about the sic-fi thing. I'm so dumb. . .for some reason when I saw it on the thread, I read sic-fi? And then I looked on the side and realized what a clueless person I was since it said paranormal. O.o Sheesh, I've got to learn how to read. XD
Very amazing writing! I absolutley LOVED this!!!! Great job and  keep up the good work!
:O :O :O This just below my mind. These usually aren't my type of stories to read, but when I started with this, I just couldn't stop!
                                    Grammar is very well, could be polished, but that with any writer. I can tell you put so much though it to this story! Amazing job!! * VOTED*
Very well written. A lot of detail, nice. There are some grammar mistakes though.
You are pretty good at details :)) In first few paragraphs, I thought you had some minor punctuations mistake, but as I continued to read further... I gotta say, I'm lovin it :D It's good, how you gradually established your characters :) Good work!