I was a really awesome beginning but so scary! Poor Sofia, she was just nine years old and terrified by the hurricane and all that.
Such a great start, you've used tons of description, and the story doesn't seem too rushed. Voted and added to my library. x
That is a great start to your book :) A lot of description and that's what I like about books :) so you've got my vote, and I recommend you to keep writing :)
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