Nice prologue, and your description is pulling enough. Gotta read more to judge! :)
Very nice start. It's simple, yet elegant :) The only thing with the trailer is it kept saying preview... it was good too though.
Good start! I love how you use the one sentence paragraphs! It really catches the attention of the readers. Great job with that! :)
very good start sorry but this is all i can read right now and i will be reading it later just i got things to do and im sorry but will be back:>
Suspense, great!! This got my attention!wondering what will happen next, voted :)
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| Name | Sophie |
| Location | Australia! |
| Member Since | Jul 02, 2011 |
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