you had me hooked by the title, and i loved this chapter. it was well written and it flowed, and the descriptions were great. voted!
Ooooh, I like the "terrified...petrified...etc." floors. Very interesting beginning.
Now that I read it again it's actually really good.... O_o your first person's awesome... good despription; emotional :)
Ahhh...who is getting killed? I neeeeeddd to find out. I'm heading to the next page :)
O_O............................ no words can express my feelings ;p trust me thats good
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