Tales of Harmonin

12 Part Story 785 Reads 7 Votes
leohevia18 By leohevia18 Updated 3 months ago
Tales of Harmonin: The first part in an epic long saga. Tales of Harmonin is a science fiction fantasy taking place in an alternate universe of the milky way galaxy. The two main protagonist and their childhood friends wake up in a new world a thousand years into the future and are forced to come to terms that Earth no longer exists and everyone they knew and cared about are gone. As they look for answers as to why they’re no longer on Earth, they must survive the challenges ahead of them as a galaxy on the brink of war threatens to destroy the balance of life and ruin their friendship and sanity.
As the main cast begin to realize what human nature is capable of and discover forbidden secrets that have been locked away for eons. 

This unique book; in not only its story and characters, but in the manner that it is told, has been written and designed as a “literal” graphic novel. The book’s written text on the left side of the book, contains about three paragraphs. Then on the right side of the book, there are illustrations in comic book form. Each panel representing  2-3 scenes happening in each paragraph. With this form of visual and descriptive writing I am creating a novel that will excite the reader as they visually see what they are reading as well as help those who are more accustomed to learning visually than mentally. 

We've already completed the manuscript, and are currently working on the illustrations with my artist John Tanco-Rahim. I’ve drawn some of the concept art of the first three chapters and you can see some of John's renders on the facebook page via the link below You can also email me using the email below.

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Tales-of-Harmonin/121846061320255?bookmark_t=page

leohevia18@gmail.com

Author's Note: I've edited the Prologue and chapters 1-3. They have an over all darker tone and much more detail added. We hope everyone enjoys!
Jamira11 Jamira11 2 years ago
Good beginning...well I only read the first few sentences, but it sounds good so far. I'm gonna read it some time later XD
AimeeShaye AimeeShaye 3 years ago
I love your detail and the story line.  i think once you do all that editing, you'll be perfect!! <3
BillBarr BillBarr 3 years ago
Leo,
Good story line, but your pacing needs some tuning up.  The school fight scene drags on.  On other situations and people, I agree with Emma that more details would bring to greater life the telling of your Tales.