I liked this first chapter. Your details in it are great and I like the way you wrote this as well. Great start! :)
this seems like a great first chapter, and i thought that it was written well. the main character so far seems great, and the whole plot seems good. voted
I love these type of stories! I read a lot of more depressing stories, and its nice to have something this good to read!
I love the change and how you descirbed the bullies, It was pretty realistic and theyy sound pretty (:
I like it so far, she must be pretty rich to get a Lambo, and unlimited credit card limit.
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