It is deiffernt, but different is good! I love how you made it into a story! It's wonderful. :-)
Wow haha its funny and very nice. The stanza thing, i think you should be aware of it. Anyway, its pretty good :) You wanna be a poet?
Oh my god, this is just AMAZING! I found myself smiling the whole way through and laughing at the "fart" part, amazing! :D
I love the beginning - its really good. If you made that up, I will vote. Did you?
I... wow. I like how you started this off with a poem, it gave it a nice affect. Well done. :)
@chasingstarrs galing po.. as in nice :D hehhehe.. salamat po :* tska no problem na din.. tenks po ulit :D
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