the way you started it and got into the story was realy good, most people find it hard to start a story like that
oh my GOD, this was an epic start to the story o____0 Please continue, this story is beyond good, I want more! (:
Aww, that was awesome and kinda funny in a way :p i luv how u did the angel of a death as a kimono wearing porcelain doll looking girl,it's unique :D
that's amazing! i think im gonna cry because there are no more chapters yet. but im sure its worth the wait. so plz rite more!!!!
I like it I've only read the first chapter an I'm already addicted :) please keep writing
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