Lost In Translation

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BenCarey By BenCarey Updated 3 years ago
The fifth voyage of Gulliver. He is stranded on an island full of bears that walk on two legs and finds it exceedingly difficult to communicate with them. [Written in 2011. An exercise in voice].
abstractplane abstractplane 3 years ago
Wow, very nice Swiftian pastiche.  It does have a feel of Gulliver to the narration and a kingdom of obnoxious bears could fit right in with his travels. Although I'm pretty sure Morse Code was invented after Swift died...but so what...
TimMcFarlane TimMcFarlane 3 years ago
Hahaha very imaginative. How'd you come up with the idea for the language?
Cantabile Cantabile 3 years ago
^_^ interesting idea of communicating by urination. I hope you are continuing the story
john_chan john_chan 3 years ago
Well, the concepts imagined are brilliant, as usual. But I got the sense this is not finished. Is it finished? Otherwise it's great! Kind of feels like Gulliver's Travels. Beautiful!