Good start. Like the others, the proof will be in the later chapters. Can't wait!
hooked me instantly , you're a really talented writer, the description was amazing , keep up the great work :))
Yay! A fellow AT Fan. I really liked the detail in your story and the characters. It's a try interesting plot.
Really good so far. It really drew me in and made me want to read more. Overall great job! I'll definetly keep reading.
Amazing! That's all I can say! I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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