Awwww, i remember reading this a long time ago, but i just read it again, and i still like it(:
I really enjoy reading this, it's different from the other stories soo don't sto and udate pleeasse ;)
Wow This is very good, i like how you give the perspective of both dot and zip, that makes it very interesting for me.
I cant wait for this to be finished
@BenCarey awwwww (not saying that I condone the act of School shootings, but the Whole Idea of it is interesting)
AM NEW HERE THOUGH, YOUR PIECE IS THE FIRST I READ AND ITS A GOOD WAY TO START OUT I HERE I GUESS. :)
I'm happy I read the whole thing. It's good, but I don't like the roundabout swapping between zip and dot. You should make a sequel!
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