you're welcome, thank you lol, and it's no problem, I like the way you write hope that doesn't sound creepy
@iSecretlySincere Ha! becoming blank is the hardest part i think EVERYONE here absolutely hates! but either way, kudoes on what you wrote!
Good job! Love how you put emphasis on the line about moving on. It really outlines the purpose of the poem. The quote at the top was also a nice touch!
i love how the words flow together, it's very smooth and i love the meaning behind it. Very well done :)
A very inspiring poem. I guess sometimes we all need to just move on. I can relate. Keep writing!
Nice message you've got there. I quite agree that life is really about moving forwards. It's hard to remain stagnant. Keep it up! :))
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