Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow.
This was just... Scary. And sad.
Will move on, can't give a long comment yet. Will make up by giving an extra comment. ;)
love it i will read more after school is out it draws u in a creepy way i love it
What in the world?! I can already tell this is going to be an interesting story.
Great start! Excellent hook.
I think it's really scary :// I dont read thrillers a lot, but this one totally hooked me:)
OK, that was spooky! I wonder why the little girl is strapped to the chair. Moving on and voted! :)
@ohthreelove Yes, I added it to my library and will keep on reading after I'm done commenting on other people's stories :)
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