your style is awesome. i especially loved that part where you alternated the "Please help me" and what was happening to her. Well done. :>
So proud. Excellent read. The story had my imagination running away from me and totally in raptures. Well done. Want to read more
Words fail me just how fantastic and what a pleasure to read from someone so young. I'm so proud of you,please keep more books coming.
This was beautifully written from start to finish. Loved it! Your descriptions and use of words were just lovely!
@Jisabella your welcome. I will continue reading but I don't have time right now so... see you in the next chapters! :)
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