Powerfully emotive. Absolutely stunning use of descriptive language, and the pacing is sublime.
beautiful. love the detail in this. lovely voice. everything is written with precision and honesty and comes from the heart. lovely.
You started the story sloooowwwly and introduced as step by step until you get us so involved to the point I wnated more!Really GOOD-- Voted!
wow!! this rocks and its just a page long!! really awesome, i dont really know what to say because it rocks just that much!!
Great job! VERY well-written and beautifully done. The fact that it's different and unique is another thing. Loved it! Keep it up :)
Wow. Very good!! This was amazing and touching!! You did an amazing job, you're very talented!!
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