I just stumbled upon your story, and let me tell ya. It's really good so far I think I'm gonna keep reading.
This is great. The only problem I could see was grammar and spelling. But that is understandable. I have the same problem. lol
i love how this is set in the past, and you seem to have so much knowledge about the time and place! this is a really gripping first chapter, voted!
I really liked how your showed their accents, due to the year and place it made you feel like you was back in time.
I love historical fiction and this idea definitley appeals to me! Good lengh for a starter chapter and your style flows nicely :D
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| Name | Sahara |
| Location | District 12 |
| Birthday | Dec 18 |
| Member Since | Jul 06, 2010 |
| Votes Received | 815 |