This is R rated so if you are sensitive to sexual relaions I advise you to leave, also this is about two males having a sexual relationship.
this story has potential... get a beta reader to edit for u... spelling errors distracts the reader
please this story should be long because it is a amazing story
@midnightalive2012 I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW IT WAS A BOYXBOY STORY. OMG.
whoa. for the first time something vampire-ish and not pornographic..
you srsly need to look at your grammar... its witH Not wHit.
I like it, but you really should fix the grammar and spelling errors. They make it really hard and annoying to read.