Story is captivating. Enjoyed reading it and wish they had taken their picture :p and maybe solve a crime or save a life or see a love story
By the way, the ending did complete he story. I like the shock value and I think it's perfect. This is a short story after all.
That ending was the last thing I'd ever expect, but I love it! It's like a big mix of the Twilight Zones "Midnight Sun" and "A Most Unusual Camera." Good job.
ooohhh i like the end!!!!!! the sun is getting closer nad the sky is getting redder, it makes me wonder if it will look like that in like, 40 years
Well that's great :) is there anyway we can keep in touch so I can know when you continue the story?
Such a wonderful concept! I really like how you can end the stories so easily... and with just a simple and seemingly inconsequential statement!
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