A really good start! But needs a bit improving on the punctuation; (like commas).
Oh, sorry. I misunderstood. I thought he was kidnapped, not could be. Great chapter. 7/10 Moving on. :)
I loved the introduction and you have lots of good description. A few grammar errors, but nobody's perfect! Great start! *VOTED*
Great dialogue & Description. Love it so far, and its a great chapter 1/prologue start.
I'm not verry into the whole werewolf thing...But this was pretty good. Great descriptions :)
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