Wow. This is really good. The descriptions are really well thought out and it's entirely chilling. All in all, it's a great story.
Whoa dude! Intense stuff. :D I like. The detail you put in is astounding. :D. Fanned and voted :) Keep writing more of these. I love ;D.
This is amazing. Kinda sad though. Its really well written and I didn't spot any grammar errors. Good work :)
Wow, intense again. You're a great writer, so please write more short stories :) Teri
would love to use this in theatre class if you dont mind, full credit would be given. love it! got any more ghost type stories? :D
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