Omg! Sorry to sound so much like a teenage girl (I am one, though) but seriously! This was so cool.
Wow. This is really good. The descriptions are really well thought out and it's entirely chilling. All in all, it's a great story.
Whoa dude! Intense stuff. :D I like. The detail you put in is astounding. :D.
Fanned and voted :) Keep writing more of these. I love ;D.
This is amazing.
Kinda sad though.
Its really well written and I didn't spot any grammar errors.
Good work :)
Wow, intense again. You're a great writer, so please write more short stories :)
would love to use this in theatre class if you dont mind, full credit would be given. love it! got any more ghost type stories? :D
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