Long Time No See - A Harry Potter Love Story

18 Part Story 26.6K Reads 495 Votes
Massie. By Massie. Updated 2 years ago
What would happen if you knew Harry Potter since grade school , and you were totally in love with him . What would you do if you were practically invisible to him , but didn't mind ? that's where my story starts
This is a really good idea, and I like where it's going, but I think it would be easier to read if it was split up into paragraphs for each time someone different speaks. Good start!!
This is really good but try taking a space between a few sentences that way it's easier to read.