never stop writing! i looooove the way you write, and this story is flippin AMAZING!
You have good descriptions so I can picture it. It makes a good prologue. Really good job!
Your daughter recommended you to me. I haven't read anything yet, but I'll add this to my library for pleasure reading! (:
My only complaint would be double spacing but other than that this seems like a good plot!
How original! I loved the idea and it's not bad at all for your first ever attempt at writing :)
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| Name | Kate |
| Location | UK |
| Birthday | Mar 18 |
| Member Since | Oct 24, 2011 |
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