The Albino Series: Book 1 Fire in the Eyes

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Chi-Chan By GreenGum Updated 3 years ago
I felt my dad drag me back. I felt the thoughts about him murdering my friends. I felt branches scratch my bandaged ankles. I struggled landing and kicked I finally landed on the groin, but he didn't even flinch. When he stopped, he pulled out his knife, I gulped when I saw the light reflect on the moon light. He slowly dragged it across my wrists. Blood oozed out, I cried in agony. "I would have gone easy on you, but you leave me no choice", My dad spat.
I love albinos! ^^ 
                                    I want to adopt one some day. (: 
                                    Name her Shiro, like Deadman Wonderland's Shiro. :D
Interesting chapter, maybe a little rushed but really interesting!
Wow interesting start, I love the fresh character, an albino thats really cool!
I like this idea and story line. I'm not really sure why her eyes are red. Was she born that way or is she a supernatural creature. Anywayss I hope things become more clearer in the new chapter. Oh and clechay is spet cliche anywayss I liked the idea and am moving onto the next chapter
LOVE how you described her being an Albino. People don't usually write about Albinos even though they are around in our world as well. This was a great start. You had one spelling error. It's cliche not cleshay. Other than that, this was really suspenseful and amazing. VOTED.