Wow , the prologue is really cool. I love the ambiguity of it. Also, you use the best vocabulary. Definitely worth my vote! :)
WOW! This first chapter is amazing! I can't believe her father killed himself. She has a lot to deal with in such a short time period. You're a great writter.
I adore this, its very well described and well written ! Keep on writing, you're amazing!
There are afew words that don't quite fit, like jolly, but I like it and don't see any big mistakes. great job =)
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