That was really good! Along with about everyone else i really like the word choice. Keep writing!!!!!!
i love your choice of words, i feel as if i'm in the story; one of the kids that are listening. you're so creative C': this is pure AWESOMENESS!:DD
i really love how detailed you were in the beginning (: first page and i kind of want to be this "Sequoya" :DD off to the next page :DDD
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