The Perfect System

1 Part Story 37.6K Reads 629 Votes
BenCarey By BenCarey Updated 9 months ago
A young boy begins to question the values and beliefs of the society he lives in with devastating consequences. [Written in 2008][#1 in Science Fiction - 07/01/12].
mash_potato mash_potato 2 years ago
@Spencer_Reid_Lover im afraid sims would get a mind of their own in The Sims 4.
mash_potato mash_potato 2 years ago
I wish my sim would not do this. LOL i often get errors when saving the game. you play sims do you? what expansion packs do you have? :) you are a very interesting person.
isragul isragul 2 years ago
The story is very beautiful, but it's too short. I think you should develop it. I am looking forward to read it again. :)
BayOfTheBadWolf BayOfTheBadWolf 2 years ago
The Community... Like in the novel, The Giver? I sensed some allusion there,
RossWilliams3 RossWilliams3 2 years ago
I think it's nice when stories have a point. I can think of very few that do. This one doesn't have one either.
tutut8 tutut8 2 years ago
@Thefallenkittykat really? I just look how long the story is