The Perfect System

A young boy begins to question the values and beliefs of the society he lives in with devastating consequences. [Written in 2008][#1 in Science Fiction - 07/01/12].
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The story is very beautiful, but it's too short. I think you should develop it. I am looking forward to read it again. :)
I think it's nice when stories have a point. I can think of very few that do. This one doesn't have one either.
That is a long story longer than my tiger turn book and the cold world book. Please read them books!?
That was fabulous! The end with all the red text and empty void? Gosh, you're amazing!

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Name Ben Carey
Location Brisbane, Queensland, Australia
Member Since Oct 09, 2011
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