The story is very beautiful, but it's too short. I think you should develop it. I am looking forward to read it again. :)
I think it's nice when stories have a point. I can think of very few that do. This one doesn't have one either.
That is a long story longer than my tiger turn book and the cold world book. Please read them books!?
That was fabulous! The end with all the red text and empty void? Gosh, you're amazing!
Very good I read a book at school this is just like it I loved couldn't stop readin
As a big fan of the Sims, I really love this! You captured the game perfectly well and I certainly love the ending. Thank you for writing this :D
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