The story is very beautiful, but it's too short. I think you should develop it. I am looking forward to read it again. :)
I think it's nice when stories have a point. I can think of very few that do. This one doesn't have one either.
That is a long story longer than my tiger turn book and the cold world book. Please read them books!?
It was sims! I don't know if you did it sorta based on sims but his car arriving in an hour reminded me of it! I really liked it! :)
That was fabulous! The end with all the red text and empty void? Gosh, you're amazing!
Very good I read a book at school this is just like it I loved couldn't stop readin
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