Prologue is pretty short. Perhaps extend it a little bit? But overall, i like the plot of this story and it sounds very interesting! (:
Nice prologue, draws the reader in and your summary sounds very interesting. Reading on ;)
This sounds interesting. I haven't seen anything like this from a guy point of view.
I like the idea of the story. This is great prologue short and sweet emotional and deep good work
great prologue :) i also like short prologues so this one interested me straight away! :) off to the first chapter now.
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