Some of the rhythm reminds me of Dr. Seuss stories - the actual words, well not as much! Creatively written!
real creative, original eye-catching intro! great job at rhythming the words at the same time telling the story smoothly.
I think it is a really good short story!! Plz read my story's and in search button rye in billy99 plz
Hahaha omg loved the little rhyme at the end. I even cringed because of the cake! :D
@LadyDawn Isn't Yule just all of it, more or less? I bet I'm wrong. I can never remember my holidays...
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| Name | Heather McGhee |
| Location | Somewhere under the Arkansas Pine trees |
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