This is really good, but you should have kept his name as Jayden...Jack just makes him sound, not like a teen. I don't know. But this is still really good.
I really like this...by the way, the main dude you chose? pretty friggin gorgeous(:
Wow, love this. :) Six feet and he's the short one?? Dang! Tall family. I'm 5'2'. XD
IM LEAVING A COMMENT ! (: soo uhmm yeaa your reeaaaaally talented at writing stories (: <3 :P aaaaand i reaaaaally like numb sooo yeeah okaay byee !!!! (:
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