My only complaint is that Aston is referred to as the older man. It makes him sound like he's in his 40s or older. Apart from that a great story <3
I love his little sister!! She's so cute!! Love their bond! Aww!! unrequited Love!!! I love/hate those!! like it so far!
Just say that I hate the fact David is leaving his sister. That's harsh. She's only FOUR!
whoa you sure just like to cut to the chase huh? dnt keep we waitin like other writers? i like it!!!!
Love your writing, I feel bad for David cuz he is being forced into marriage ... at first I didnt even know if he was gay or not :L
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