Will you please stop chasing me!

12 Part Story 35K Reads 673 Votes
firedragon By firedragon Updated 2 years ago
It was suppose to be something like boy meets girl but then it became girl gets chased by the devil child. SAVE ME!
happinie happinie 4 years ago
oooooo. Loving the story!!! I like that  you decided to go into third person. 
happinie happinie 4 years ago
I think that the beginning paragraph seems to grab your attention.
happinie happinie 4 years ago
I think that if you're going to introduce the characters I guess this is okay too. But I think that the best way to introduce them is to let the readers get to know them throughout the story. Like introducing it at the main character's friend or something. 
Lacey2GalaxyB Lacey2GalaxyB 4 years ago
This is amazing. Third person right? Or is it called something else? Ah I don't. Ima continue though. This is REALLY good!!! ~~~~ :D
LackOInterest LackOInterest 5 years ago
I LOVE IT!! I DON'T GET, BUT STILL LOOVE IT!!!

i just wish it was longer.