I really liked this! Its not what I usually read, but I was able to really get into it! Great Job!
This was awesome!! ;p The scene reminds me of one in I am Number 4, if u've read the buk. It was relli kewl, a different concept which i relli lykd ;p xoxo
I really like it so far :) and Niftykiss also reccommended me and I am glad i had a read. Good work, you have my vote.
usually I hate prologues, but this one is actually really good. this isn't really my kind of story but it is very interesting, I like it, keep writing! :D
This prologue is MUCH better :) It catches the readers attention in ways that the old one couldn't. well done
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