I really, really like your writing style. I love your description, and I think this story is gonna be really good! I like it already :)
LOL, bitch 1 and bitch 2 ;) haha, i liked this chapter. OHHH, FOOD FIGHT! Lol, ohhhhh, they're in trouble noooooooow ;P hehe, I liked this! ~voted~
Haha, oh wow, I love how they became friends, it had me laughing...quite frankly this whole chapter was awesome! On to the next!
This is one hell of a start! It's amazing and I love your writing style (: Off to the nex chapter :D
pretty good(: i agree with the others that the beginning starts off slow but then i feel more drawn in toward the end. nice work(;
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| Name | Jacqueline Michelle |
| Location | Here, there, and everywhere |
| Member Since | Sep 23, 2010 |
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