I like the way you've started this story, it's a difference to what I usually read, which is very refreshing, I look forward to reading more!
awesum story. i'm usually not a fan of thriller, but bethany's pov kinda soften the thriller nuance :D
I like it, it's different but I like it(: the only prob I see is chapter 2 part is it in a did point of view then the first??
This is really good. I think the title could be a tad shorter, though. Maybe something that alludes to the ominousness in the story?
OHMYGOD Beth :O Thats was so freaky but I liked it, I apsolutey will read more :)
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